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Pages 21-22 of Carciphona: Volume 4 are up!

I don't believe that demon infusion is irreversible despite what Kasga said in the new pages.

Really, what ending would that leave us with? I came to the conclusion a while ago that by the end of Carciphona, Blackbird will be either:
:bulletblack: free of the demon spirits that she is likely possessed by
or
:bulletblack: dead

Or Shilin could just leave her hanging. I've seen it before. But I doubt it.

I don't know.

And...where might that leave Veloce? (if demon infusion is irreversible)

If Blackbird died, that would kinda suck.
If Veloce died, that would really suck.
If Veloce and Blackbird died, Carciphona wouldn't be a story anymore. By definition, it would be a tragedy.

Carciphona has a thick and intricate but delicate plot. There is an official main cast of only four: Veloce, Blackbird, Keri, and Weirin. If something happened to any of them, it would mess up the whole story. The protagonist (Veloce) and probably the antagonist (Blackbird) are both demon-bound. If it is actually true that demon infusion is irreversible, the plot is static (unchanging) and pretty much doomed to a bleak, indifferent, and unexciting ending.

Simply put (for people like ~LordofStupidity), the story would just stay the same and have a boring ending.

On a brighter note: [link]
Vocruen left long ago saying he could not let Veloce come with him because "[he] will put [her] in danger." That always seemed a bit shady to me...Now here Blackbird is saying that Vocruen was "as treacherous as [she] is." AND now here Vocruen is summoning what looks like demon spirits with a dark and shady expression on his face. You can go so far as to say evil. If you don't want to, you have to at least admit it's questionable.
Vocruen was with Veloce when she was eight, and left when she was thirteen (Veloce mentioned in Volume 2 that it was four years ago, and she's seventeen now). So he was with her for at least five years. Yet Blackbird says she has talked to Veloce more in the past few days than Vocruen has his whole life, and Veloce doesn't deny it. That's very little conversation on Vocruen's part for five years...you could go so far as to call it neglect. Hmm...I wonder what he was so busy with...?
That's the past, though. In present-day Carciphona, Vocruen is dead. Shilin even mentioned in a comment that he's as dead as it gets, and she doesn't lie to her readers. Veloce doesn't believe it.

Also...Blackbird talks down to Keri, Meron, and now Vocruen as if they're pretty much useless to Veloce...but what makes her think she's so valuable to Veloce?! :roll: She's practically possessive of her.

Oh, and I hate to burst all of your bubbles, but a few pages back, that was not an uppercut. It was a slap. Veloce's hand was open. =P

Veloce's dismissiveness was clearly because -- as we could tell from the very beginning of Carciphona -- she wants to be left alone, and because Blackbird hurt her feelings. Up to now she's really just tired, maybe even exhausted, of Blackbird.
Maybe Blackbird will leave her alone for a little while to make room for the rest of the story to progress, and let us find out more about Vocruen.
Maybe she'll listen to Veloce and stop being so selfish. Yeah no probably not :)

:rose: This has been StrongButGentle :meditation:

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Meredith
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I strive to be strong but gentle. :meditation:

To be strong is to love passionately, to be pure and independent, to be patient and prudent, to be grace under pressure, to be modestly outspoken, to have the courage to endure. Strength does not mean to not cry or feel pain, rather, tears and suffering are purifying and sustaining. To live through such suffering also shows how strong you are.
To be gentle is to be kind, loving, and lighthearted, to show mercy and self-sacrifice. To be gentle is to show compassion to the suffering, to protect the weak, and to serve others.

To be strong but gentle before God means to trust in Him always, to remember who you are and what you stand for, to restrain from temptation, to humble yourself before Him, and to pray for others.

To know freedom is to know that real freedom means loyalty to the rules to ensure love, peace, and joy for yourself and others -- that freedom is not merely breaking the rules for the sake of rebellion and zeal.

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I have been drawing since I was six years old. I didn't think much of my drawings, but my classmates were stunned by them. I drew a pair of pink Converse sneakers when I was nine years old, and my mom was so amazed she got me to sign it and made copies of it to everyone she knew. Then she consigned me to a ton of art courses in drawing, painting, and a little of ceramics at Attleboro Art Museum in Rhode Island.
I've been doing art as my therapy and for pleasure since :)

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~StrongButGentle 13 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:omg: Evil...
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:iconlordofstupidity:
Vocruen isn't evil!! I think...
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~StrongButGentle 12 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:unimpressed:
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Thank you for the faves ! :iconmeowkittythanksplz::iconheart4uplz:
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~StrongButGentle 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D
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Thank you for the favorite :faint:
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~StrongButGentle 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YW :hug:
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~MoodyBlue 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thx lovely Meredith! :+fav: [link] :hug:
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~StrongButGentle 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YW :heart:
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